能否批改一下我寫(xiě)的這篇2021年考研英語(yǔ)小作文？

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• G同學(xué)
  求一篇用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)的作文《服裝店的廣告》
  • 曾老師
    come to guangming clothes store 快來(lái)光明服裝店！
    our clothes are on sale . 我們的衣服正在大減價(jià)。
    we sell pants for only 30 yuan. 我們賣(mài)的褲子只要30元。
    do you like white bag 你喜歡白色的包嗎？
    it's only 15 yuan. 只要15元。
    we have beautiful black hats for only 12 yuan each. 我們有漂亮的黑色帽子只要12元一頂。
    do you like sweaters in red green blue and orange 你喜歡紅色、綠色、藍(lán)色和橙色的毛衣嗎？
    you can buy it for only 20 yuan. 你能以20元的價(jià)格買(mǎi)到它。
    come and see for yourself at guangming clothes store. 親自來(lái)光明服裝店看一看吧。
• T同學(xué)
  0基礎(chǔ)考研英語(yǔ)怎么學(xué)？我考的英語(yǔ)二
  • 李老師
    " 零基礎(chǔ)就是要補(bǔ)基礎(chǔ)呀盆友！英語(yǔ)渣的我最喜歡解析特別詳細(xì)的英語(yǔ)真題書(shū)——英語(yǔ)二的《考研圣經(jīng)》，它對(duì)每個(gè)重點(diǎn)詞匯、每一個(gè)句子的語(yǔ)法都做了很詳細(xì)的講解和分析。
    最明顯的就是看文章不那么費(fèi)勁啦，能看懂的部分變多啦！希望用它能突破英語(yǔ)！
    "
• 思同學(xué)
  英語(yǔ)作文，就是一個(gè)英語(yǔ)小組討論怎樣學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，然后用簡(jiǎn)潔的話(huà)把它寫(xiě)出來(lái)。
  • 陳老師
    those who always perform outstandingly in school are frequently referred to as top students. they are much admired by other students and much appreciated by their teachers and their parents alike. although most of us are just average students with average intelligence who can honestly say that he or she never has thought of becoming a top student
    
    
    many people think that top students are genius but according to my observation top students are just average students who have the following characteristics. to begin with top students seem to have clear and concrete goals in their life. they know what they want and will never give up whatever difficulties they come across. next top students seem to have very good study habits. they listen to the teachers attentively and answer the teachers questions actively in class and do what the teachers ask them to do after class. they read other books related to the subject to widen their scope of knowledge. finally top students seem to have a wide variety of interests. they engage themselves in att kinds of activities. as a result they atso excel in other aspects.
    
    
    
    i am also determined to become a top student. i witt regard the top students as my rote models and witt go out of my way to get to know them and learn from them.